Not my type of music, but
i think the vocals could have been better synced with the music especially the ending lines. (Who's broke? I'm broke.. etc.) The background beat was definitely the best part of the song. Lyrical wise, you need to learn more words. hah, nah but a little bit more selection of words couldn't hurt. Overall this song, right now, is alright, but there is a ton of room for improvement. good job though.
i agree sir, this is godly to their garbage... I'm jus waiting for them to get serious. I agree completely with you, and thanks 4 the review
Keep it pimpin'
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